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CrazyHorse
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since 2008-08-23
Posts 31
New-Brunswick, Canada

0 posted 2008-09-22 08:39 PM


Well I feel like I'm walkin' around last night's dream
It was so nice to see you kneeling by my side
And though I'm not even sure,
If your name'll still mean the same
Just lay back, Mama, lay back
It's so good to be riding without you here
Away from your wear and tear

Well you're not the one I was talking to last morning
But when you look in the mirror, it's written all over your eyes
That you're not even sure,
Who's eyes you'd really like to blame
Not much love, Mama, do what you can, Mama
We can spread what we've got all around us now
Just do what you can with love

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Pilgrimage
Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
1 posted 2008-09-23 11:34 AM


I like this song.  I can almost sing it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
2 posted 2008-09-23 12:07 PM




nicely done
I like it

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