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Open Poetry #43
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2008-09-22 07:56 PM

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Sun or moon—
All the same
With sake


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echolong
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since 2008-09-17
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1 posted 2008-09-22 08:06 PM

Under sun sake is for cooking
Under moon it is for sobbing


Old Echo
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since 2001-12-04
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2 posted 2008-09-23 11:26 AM

Oh, I love that.  You are a master of the small and significant feeling.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)
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