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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2008-09-21 11:03 PM





Belgian chargers wheel

nostrils flaring at the call

lances ring on steel

timeless moments in the Fall


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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2008-09-21 11:41 PM


I can smell the sacrifice

churning smoke

in coils...

*equinox*


Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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2 posted 2008-09-22 03:17 PM


Great imagery here.
                 Ida

WTBAKELAR
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3 posted 2008-09-22 03:27 PM


Reminds me of Midevel Times.
The dinner and show theater.  
Those are great fun.
Well done how just a few words can get the mind to working.


Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
4 posted 2008-09-23 08:34 AM


I can't see it in my mind as you can but your words make me feel it..

"timeless fall" indeed.

  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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