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the point of quill
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the point of quill |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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You don't really think that you are shedding light on me through "truth" as you see it, prismed by the tears of lies in gaveling I'm laughing 'till it hurts (it hurts) The atom was not split but burst by the hone-edge point of quill feathering the sky. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The sharpness of a true quill leaves one to reflect on the damage it could actually do... as well as the love it would float in and upon. The point of your quill will always be sharp but always filled with truth ink.  [This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-21-2008 08:49 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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*smile* When I have to think harder about a reply than what I wrote? I feel like I mucked up.  Um...did that mean you liked it?  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sweetheart, you've never let me down, ever! You pull so much into play and especially even more with your "short" poems, that one can dive deeply and come up gasping. That kinda goes with your long poems, too... but there are breaths inbetween the long ones, and not so much time to breathe with the short ones. Dang, but you're GOOD!  And yes, I will return to the Lounge, soon! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You know me, and so you know I like to write on various levels at once (I'm a huge fan of tri-level chess) but this one was so easy to me... my sister Cath? smile...oh I miss her. She feather painted her walls, spanish style, gold on faux stucco (a suburban nightmare?) but it actually looked lovely when she was done... even the prisms that hanged from her lamps are in this poem.  But really, the point of it was we can't help affectation (or effect) when we write, we control one end only. So yeah...  love ya lady! I think you "got" it! *hugs* |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
..."we control one end only". I like that a lot! Enjoyed your quill tonight, and I humbly thank you. |
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