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Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2008-09-21 03:40 AM




© Copyright 2008 Alison - All Rights Reserved
OwlSA
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1 posted 2008-09-21 05:05 AM


Powerfully beautiful, Alison!

- Owl

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-09-21 06:12 AM


The vastness of this panorama and the profound beauty of your words allow this reader to breathe with deepened awareness.

Just beautiful, dear Alison!

Love,
Margherita

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3 posted 2008-09-21 09:20 AM


My gold star student!!!
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Gaia
4 posted 2008-09-21 09:23 AM


A beautiful photo and poem, Alison.
Thank you for sharing, and releasing a memory.

Sunshine
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5 posted 2008-09-21 10:28 AM


So lovely, Alison!




Honeybunch
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6 posted 2008-09-21 03:47 PM


Wonderful, Alison!  Who could say 'no' to an invasion like that?

Helen

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7 posted 2008-09-21 10:28 PM



This is becoming a habit with you my dear,

coming up with these beautiful pictures and words to match. Much enjoyed.  Love

Lindsay

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8 posted 2008-09-22 09:51 PM


'emblazon'
'empowers'
'imagine'
'autumnal'

powerful words in each line...very nicely done...

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9 posted 2008-09-22 11:56 PM


Amazing poem.
excellent work.

Alison
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10 posted 2008-09-23 12:19 PM


-Owl,

Thank you for reading and enjoying this one.

Alison

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Margherita,

Thank you - it is big country here.  There is so much to just marvel over.

Alison

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Balladeer,

Thank you for sticking with me on these poems.  This one is stronger because of your efforts.  Thank you, oh wonderful teacher man.

Alison

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I am thrilled that this one brings back those memories to you, Kacy.  I am glad that you enjoyed it.

Alison

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Sunshine,

Thank you.

Alison

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Helen,

Thank you for reading and responding to this poem and picture.

Alison

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Lindsay,

I love meshing my love for photography with the poems.  They inspire me.

Love,
Alison

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steaven,

Thank you - that was all part of Balladeer's assignment.  He made a good one, didn't he.  Thank you for focusing on those words.

Alison

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DreamerSpirit,

Thank you so much for enjoying.

Alison

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11 posted 2008-09-23 10:48 AM


Alison, this is just breathtaking! And such wonderful words from your pen.
Love it!!

The Lady
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12 posted 2008-09-23 01:00 PM




just one word Alison

perfect!


Alison
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13 posted 2008-10-06 02:51 PM


Misty Lilacs and Lady,

Thank you both very much.

xoxoxo
A

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14 posted 2008-10-06 10:32 PM


Beautiful Allison, I'm enjoying that invasion here starting to paint all the trees. Great write. Take care and Have fun. Steve


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15 posted 2008-10-06 11:44 PM


Allison,

I'm speachless, this is amazing. Beautiful photo, stunning writing. Congratulations on a write better than well done...

BC

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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16 posted 2008-10-07 05:46 AM


Ali-girl.. I love your beautiful thoughts and stunning picture... thank you xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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17 posted 2008-10-07 07:09 AM


Poetry workshop??? Oh, yes, that place you USED to frequent!
Robert E. Jordan
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18 posted 2008-10-07 09:52 AM


Yo dear Alison,

This is a lovely picture/poem combination.

Love Bobby

2islander2
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19 posted 2008-10-07 01:36 PM


Dear Alison, this is so beautiful to see and read....Great work....


yann

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20 posted 2008-10-07 02:45 PM


Alison, I'm so glad this came back up so I wouldn't
miss it. All of it is just perfect....the words
as well as the photography. Thank you so much
for sharing it with us, dear Alison!!
Hugs,
Ethel

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