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sklagurl17
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since 2008-09-08
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0 posted 2008-09-21 12:56 PM



The screaming of voices louder than words.
It has me on edge and on the verge.
Confusion sweeps throughout my body.
Not helping me nor letting me go.
I stand alone and think of the simple man.
Who has nothing but the shoes of a name brand.

I'll wait for that sunny day.
Where the birds will chirp and the sun will ray.
I just want you to be satisfied.
"Be something you love and understand."
Don't let anyone see you down.
Just take a break on the firm damp ground.

I miss you Jason.
You were the man.
Come talk to me in my dreams if you can.


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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-09-21 06:55 AM


quote:
Come talk to me in my dreams if you can.



I think this is such a gentle invitation and I do believe that on dream level so many gifts are bestowed upon us.

Intense write.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2008-09-22 06:47 PM


I enjoyed reading this...James
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