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Autumn glances
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Autumn glances |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Autumn glances Dressed in sunset hues every single leaf dances to the westerly wind blues, not remotely shaken by the deadly implications of this warm requiem, performed with equal joy and participation as if it was all about celebrating birth. And maybe it is ... The sun plays along, dipping every leaf in its golden light gifting it with its own sacred moment of transfiguration. And I am part of it ... Autumn glances from the humming tree pierce my heart, while the leaves whisper “let go and weave your mourning heart beats into the choreography of our graceful leaving”. And breathing in rhythm to nature’s tune of wisdom I let go and surrender sharing the spirit of perfect harmony permeating all the seasons of life ... and reaching deep into eternity *** |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Margherita, There are lots of good thoughts in this poem. Love Bobby |
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sklagurl17 Junior Member
since 2008-09-08
Posts 43nc. |
well written. |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Wonderful imagery. Very much enjoyed. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, Margherita, this is so very beautiful on every imaginable level, especially in the light of your sad news. Hugs of every size - Owl |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You sparkle here, in the positive light of seasons meant to change. Always enjoy your reflections sweet poetess.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is soothing, a spiritual beauty that awakens the heart and mind, and embraces the gifts of the universe. Thank you for sharing such a fine autumn poem, and lovely photo. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Autumn beautifully portrayed in your words , I love the colourful hues of Autumn leaves Hope |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Just beautiful Margherita! ARCTIC WIND |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I'm saving this one Margharita. You paint the world with such magnificent color. You are the van Gogh of poets. Ida |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"And breathing in rhythm to nature’s tune of wisdom I let go and surrender" Love this particularly, Margherita, but the whole poem is wonderful! Love Helen |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
And breathing in rhythm to nature’s tune of wisdom I let go and surrender Ditto with Helen on this one Margherita a beautiful poem, one of your best. love Lindsay |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"And maybe it is ..." I have a couple of things I would like to say Margherita one is "sigh" and the other is "ohhh sigh" |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
I loved this one Margherita excellent write. Denis. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful Margherita! Love, Eric |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Autumn brings out the best in poets. Quote = "AUTUMNS DON'T HURT AS BAD AS FALLS" Wm. Tracey Bakelar |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And maybe it is ... The sun plays along, dipping every leaf in its golden light gifting it with its own sacred moment of transfiguration. And I am part of it ... ~*~ Indeed! Smiling here...broadly!  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Lovely Margherita, I am so happy that you shared your glances with us. This is lovely and a keeper for sure. Hugs and love, Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
My Poet friends, I enjoyed all of your replies so very much, THANK YOU from my heart for taking the time to read and comment! Love and joy. Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
My dear friend ....Margherita .... I stood long at your poem I read eagerly to your beautiful words you havea wonderful method your presence like presence of teacher to casts his orientation to student and my pen is a student in your school of creativity Accept my admiration and my respect thank you Nourzihane [This message has been edited by nourzihane (09-26-2008 06:27 AM).] |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
A beautifully written poetry which fills senses. clever talks delay friendship! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
THANK YOU, dear Vandana, Nourzihane and Ku! Enjoyed your replies very much! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
This has just melted my heart.... as beauty sometimes does. |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
Easily comes the image of a poet's eyes nestled upon the changing. To some, they are just part of a tree To others, they symbolize both natural awe and beauty. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
sharing the spirit of perfect harmony permeating all the seasons of life ... and reaching deep into eternity Hi Margherita, you expose yourself as a very deep person in these verses, your poem is delightful and as always conveys harmony we need of... regards yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Dedra, threadbear and Yann, THANK YOU for stopping by and for leaving such loving comments. Love and joy. Margherita |
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