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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2008-09-19 03:16 PM


Try to bring me down,
Look on me with a frown.
But it's not enough...

So I'm not like you,
Doesn't make me less than a man it's true.
It's just not enough...

Saturate myself with your taint,
And still I find a colorful scheme to paint.
That won't be enough...

All the negativity you throw my way,
I just have this one thing to say.
It's not enough...

No it's not enough to break,
Not enough to break,
NOT ENOUGH TO BREAK ME!

So I dare you break me if you can,
I'll just emerge a stronger kind of man.
Not enough to break THIS!

© Copyright 2008 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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missouri
1 posted 2008-09-19 06:30 PM


WOOT...yeah you are strong...great write kiddo
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Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
2 posted 2008-09-22 08:35 PM


I like that you had something to say and you said it.  I didn't have to try to figure out what you meant - that's for sure!

A

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