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Open Poetry #43
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2islander2
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0 posted 2008-09-18 05:20 PM


In a film,
the heroine says
by being ironic
” I believed that
the sand amused you “.
An adult listening
to the retort
thinks of a line of humor….
A child rather thinks
of some sand…
Between both
a hourglass
full of two sands,
the sand of thoughts
the sand of responsabilities….
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1 posted 2008-09-19 01:21 PM

Interesting . . .

- Owl
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2 posted 2008-09-22 08:38 PM

My response was the same as Diana's.

Interesting.
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