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SlowlyFallAway
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since 2008-08-29
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North Carolina

0 posted 2008-09-19 02:38 PM


Living up to the expectations of hatred
Here, there is only suffering
Screams peircing the night
Bullets leaving holes in the confused mind
A path leading unto darkness
One world that will shatter at the very sight of this
The destroyed creation
Burning flesh and rotting bones
The wind shifts directions blowing away faith
Nothing will bring this back
Everything is gone, memories haunt you
Like the bleeding scars carved in your skin
The steady beat of hearts slowly falls
Darkness suffocates the remains of your breath
We can only lay in a pile of fading ashes
And wait for fate to take us home

Emily Shives

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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
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My own little Icey Oblivion
1 posted 2008-09-19 03:18 PM


interesting piece, enjoyed

violence may not be the answer, but it does make good headway

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