Open Poetry #43 |
Autumn Lullaby |
sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Autumn Lullaby When fall arrives as summer ends And welcomes us with cooling winds The trees dress up so bright and bold Trimmed with leaves of red and gold The morning air is crisp and clean And meadows have a glistening sheen Of frost that coats each blade of grass That sparkles just like crystal glass A smoky scent floats through the air Rising up from barrels where The neighbors burn the leaves that fell Touched by autumns magic spell The shrubs and bushes stand undressed Revealing an empty robin’s nest The tiny rodents burrow deep Preparing for their winter sleep The flowers drop their spring time blooms And rest within their garden rooms Awaiting natures wake up call While sleeping through the days of fall If you listen closely you can hear A soothing sound so soft and clear That closes nature’s tired eyes As autumn sings her lullabies |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
If you listen closely you can hear A soothing sound so soft and clear That closes nature’s tired eyes As autumn sings her lullabies.... Wow, How beautiful! the picture, the sents, the chill in the air. What a lovely poem.. Well done. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I've been thinking about Autumn lately myself. The chill in the morning air leaves me no choice. I like the phrasing in this one. Nicely done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
beautiful poem, especially loved the ending |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
No other poet can rhyme the way you do, Stephen. and with such beautiful results. I absolutely love this. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Another delightful offering, dear Stephen! You do have a very beautiful style that transmits always captivating melodies. Can see it all and enjoy it. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Steven~ You are just so soothingly word-beautiful~ I am still in this danged hospital, but fighting with all I've got to get better and run the meadow before those trees are bare~ Thank you so much for all of your thoughtful emails and well-wishes~ *Huglets* ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Thanks for all the comments my friends they are appreciated. Marge, so great to hear from you! I know you will whip this thing and be back to your old self soon. Rest and take care. Steve |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
The shrubs and bushes stand undressed Revealing an empty robin’s nest The tiny rodents burrow deep Preparing for their winter sleep You wrote a great Autumn poem here Steve, A beautiful word picture of the lovliest season of the year. Thank you, take care. Lindsay |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
One of my favorites you have written. Awesome! |
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