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Open Poetry #43

How many Moons

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

0 posted 2008-09-19 10:24 AM

How many Moons

How many suns have gone by so far,
And moons have passed by up above.
We bathe in the warmth of the life giving sun,
Romanticize by the moon made for love,
If we had more nights with the moon in our eyes,
As we do days with the sun,
Would we love each other more?
Would we dream sweeter dreams?
Could we all learn to live as one?

Wm. Tracey Bakelar
2008

[This message has been edited by WTBAKELAR (09-19-2008 11:19 AM).]

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2008-09-19 12:23 PM

I'm not sure about the sudden move from concrete images to an all-encompassing 'can we all...' question at the end, but I like the beginning. I like the images very much.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-09-19 04:28 PM

like that 'moon in our eyes' philosophy...nicely done...

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