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Paternalism
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Paternalism |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Paternalism If only a band aid cured cancer Or undid the open wounds on a heart Returned warmth to a cold, frozen soul Or awakened the injustices We committed against each other How are we less capable of evil? When there's the same opportunity The only difference visible Is a warm, gentle fabrication Which we allow others to believe Juju -Juju |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Juju, The thought is there in this poem, and it is a very good one. Love Bobby |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
I liked the thought process as well. I have a particularly hard time putting brainpower into my poems, instead of a "reigned in" raw emotion. I'm impressed. And on a side note- I'm in love with you.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A very thought-fill and thoughtful write, my friend. It's good to be able to have some free time so I can catch up on your writings.  |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thank you for all of your posts vm -I am in love with you too -Juju |
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