Open Poetry #43 |
No time |
Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
So tired. I race the sun The moon The sun How long now till my race is done I want to sleep To rest To dream Instead i must strive Not to live Just stay alive Can't i stop just for one hour one day To catch my breath Before it runs away. To take a lot of pain, |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Walter, This is a cute one. Just be careful you don't outrun "it". Bobby |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Take the time to count how many suns have gone by so far, and moons have passed. We romanticize under the moon more than the sun. Maybe if we had as many nights with the moon as we do days with the sun, we would all love each other more. Sounds like the makings of a poem. |
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