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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2008-09-17 08:40 PM



Stare

Sun reveals and moon appeals
In the shadow of your smile I remain
Draped in the magic of your eyes
Evoking from within me a dormant language
Molecules, inhaled to the surface, dance
Your sight makes its sound in blushing note
The finest of creation swells, subtle in enduring anecdote
Oils meant to silken as they spread about anticipation
Once quiet, now blatant, of their own precipitation
Stare, the universe elucidated shines from there
Upon me, to illuminate the secrets locked away
Tended all this time beyond the sheerness of inequity
Billowed to the tip of tongue, incipit softly swirls of destiny
Veils fall, leaving trace their tenderness aglitter skin
I loved you then, and more as time prevails
Even as the steam of season trails
Sun reveals and moon appeals
In the shadow of your smile I remain

Copyright Kkh 9/17/08

© Copyright 2008 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
steavenr
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1 posted 2008-09-17 10:03 PM


what can I say...exquisite...simply magnificent...once again, as ever, never disappointed...loved it
WTBAKELAR
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2 posted 2008-09-18 05:19 PM


wonderfully reminds me of the seventies.
Margherita
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3 posted 2008-09-20 09:01 AM


quote:
Stare, the universe elucidated shines from there
Upon me, to illuminate the secrets locked away
Tended all this time beyond the sheerness of inequity



Exquisite, dear Kathleen!

Love,
Margherita

Ericc
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4 posted 2008-09-20 03:30 PM


Beautiful!

Love,
Eric

1slick_lady
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5 posted 2008-09-20 09:05 PM


everytime i read you i am in awe
The Lady
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6 posted 2008-09-21 10:45 PM




there is always that jewel that catches me TD

"Veils fall, leaving trace their tenderness aglitter skin"


serenity blaze
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7 posted 2008-09-21 10:56 PM


I tend to like to punch out my readers with a last line--you get 'em with the first:

"Sun reveals and moon appeals"

and smile, if it seems like I'm sniffin' yer arse, I yam.

You are writing some good new stuff!!!



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