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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Stare Sun reveals and moon appeals In the shadow of your smile I remain Draped in the magic of your eyes Evoking from within me a dormant language Molecules, inhaled to the surface, dance Your sight makes its sound in blushing note The finest of creation swells, subtle in enduring anecdote Oils meant to silken as they spread about anticipation Once quiet, now blatant, of their own precipitation Stare, the universe elucidated shines from there Upon me, to illuminate the secrets locked away Tended all this time beyond the sheerness of inequity Billowed to the tip of tongue, incipit softly swirls of destiny Veils fall, leaving trace their tenderness aglitter skin I loved you then, and more as time prevails Even as the steam of season trails Sun reveals and moon appeals In the shadow of your smile I remain Copyright Kkh 9/17/08 |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
what can I say...exquisite...simply magnificent...once again, as ever, never disappointed...loved it |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
wonderfully reminds me of the seventies. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Exquisite, dear Kathleen! Love, Margherita |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Love, Eric |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
everytime i read you i am in awe |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
there is always that jewel that catches me TD "Veils fall, leaving trace their tenderness aglitter skin" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I tend to like to punch out my readers with a last line--you get 'em with the first: "Sun reveals and moon appeals" and smile, if it seems like I'm sniffin' yer arse, I yam. You are writing some good new stuff!!!  |
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