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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-09-17 05:45 AM

sofa samba sounds
slow easy gravy over morning
sipping melted coffee kiss
with lips knowing each other
as memory flavors

windows are warm with sun
and you wear them on your back
letting my eyes know you
without colors on
or buttons

and then my hands too
as yours touch my face
closing my eyes on purpose
and I am just imagining again
while you ask me in laughter

if anything has changed
since I wore you like jeans
an hour ago snugly tight
and we rolled on the floor
like children's toys in love

roughly and nearly unbreakable

daark (white stone series)

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

1 posted 2008-09-17 06:08 AM

"while you ask me in laughter

if anything has changed
since I wore you like jeans
an hour ago snugly tight
and we rolled on the floor
like children's toys in love

roughly and nearly unbreakable"

'since I wore you like jeans'

Damn I wish I could do that.
Write like that, I mean
{laughing here, and turning red}

When will you publish your poetry so I may have it all? I would buy two copies at once so as to still have one after wearing the ink off the pages of the first.

Good morning Daark.

Caroline

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2008-09-17 07:12 AM

Ms Caroline. You bless me and I so love your blush. Thanks lady!!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2008-09-17 03:55 PM

quote:
widows are warm with sun
and you wear them on your back
letting my eyes know you
without colors on
or buttons

I guess I could well imagine a warm widow...
and I could also imagine wearing one or two on my back...

Lovely sounds, D.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2008-09-17 03:57 PM

I see that you're up for formal occasions!

This one was irresistible.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2008-09-17 04:26 PM

Ms sun you make me smile when you take my words as candy pills and smile them after.
__________

Ms serene, thanks lady for your eye sounds on my pen

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

6 posted 2008-09-17 07:10 PM

"sipping melted coffee kiss
with lips knowing each other
as memory flavors"

neat lines, nigh unto perfection...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2008-09-18 06:25 AM

thanks stevenar

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