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Open Poetry #43

Semper Fidelis

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-09-15 10:52 AM

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Though growing old
I love you still—

September moon
Behind the clouds

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-09-15 02:52 PM

Yo John,

This is a lovely thought and poem. I like it loads.

Bobby

JenniferMaxwell

Member Elite

since 2006-09-14

Posts 2423

2 posted 2008-09-15 05:31 PM

Me, too. I like it very much, Huan. A very delicate rendering that transports the reader to a calmer place. Lovely write.

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2008-10-04 02:50 PM

this deserves a bump...too good to be passed by

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2008-10-04 03:21 PM

Huan Yi,

From young in love, to growing old and feeling the same. Much meaning in few words. Nice to get older and still love for sure...

BC

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2008-10-04 06:53 PM

fine minimalism!

applause!!

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2008-10-05 07:04 AM

nice write.

yann

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