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Silence Loud |
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kanashe Member
since 2008-05-21
Posts 59america 
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An endless space A weightless grace Step forward Step back Movements like lace Twisting and turning A new kind of yearning Up Down All around me floating No sun No rain No sound Silence loud All I hear is nothing Walking slowly Breathing heavy I see another world Small Alive I reach for it and sigh |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
DON'T EVER STOP REACHING. |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
I was taught never to reach for the moon. Reach for the sun instead; that way, if you fall short of the sun, you will have achieved the moon. A nicely balanced thoughtful poem. Do not go gentle into that good night. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
"all around me floating" I like this very much. kanasha. Fine writing Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Love the rhythm in this and the final sigh, yes! Love, Margherita |
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kanashe Member
since 2008-05-21
Posts 59america |
Thank you^^ -ashe |
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