Open Poetry #43 |
Before all is Mended |
Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Before all is Mended I ache when the wind blows by Like whispers into my ears I Wait for the rain to come Thats when I let go and cry Until that day of release I will let all my wounds bleed Because you cannot see them Juju -Juju |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is sadly beautiful, Juju. The well of our emotions does indeed, run deeply!! |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
How often do we hide our deepest emotions away from the people who should need to share them? Lovely poem - an economy of words but a maximum of impact. Do not go gentle into that good night. |
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