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passing shadows
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0 posted 2008-07-14 10:01 AM



"just wish that I didn't feel like there was somethin' I missed,
take back all the things I said to make you feel like that."
-Linkin Park, My December


It was always me coming into your life,
not you being let into mine,
I tried to change my transient ways,
but never felt exactly fine.

The dandelions are here this morning
but they'll be gone by tonight,
and though I loved you too late
it never felt exactly right.

So I look for bandages in all shapes
to cover the wounds left on me
from hurting you, (not meaning to)
and from loving you eternally.



© Copyright 2008 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2008-07-14 10:24 AM


Yo Passing shadows,

This is a very effective poem.

Love Bobby

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2 posted 2008-07-14 11:11 AM


When you write, I feel.

Alison

Margherita
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3 posted 2008-07-14 12:26 PM


Powerfully expressed, dear Dixie!

Love,
Margherita

HopeS
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4 posted 2008-07-14 12:53 PM


This was so touching dixie


Hope

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5 posted 2008-07-14 02:23 PM


Very lyrical in it's
strength and beauty.

Eric

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6 posted 2008-07-14 05:39 PM


good read
secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2008-07-14 07:53 PM


honest, emotive, very 'real', effective 'write'!

much applause for this fine 'penning!'

XGarapanX
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8 posted 2008-07-14 11:10 PM


All the things they said and some more.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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9 posted 2008-07-15 12:49 PM


I'm going to get up on my soap box for a minute, so just go about your business while I type.  

You know Dixie, not one of us is perfect, we all have loved and lost at some point, and we all have our share of misgivings.  We are human after all, so much so that we are capable of loving eternally, just like you said.  In a way I feel sorry for the person who can't find it in their heart to forgive.  I played the victim for a long time and in retrospect,  it was both sickening and silly.  I love the thought of your poem and all that it conveys.  That's what I mean about the subtle changes in your poetry, it becomes you Dixie, in the very best way.  

passing shadows
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10 posted 2008-07-15 06:49 AM


you all touch me very deeply with your comments

Lori, especially you...your comment will remain in my heart forever

thank you

ThisDiamond
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11 posted 2008-07-15 08:37 AM


Exposing the depths of regret and the heights of victory.
Well done

nakdthoughts
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12 posted 2008-07-15 08:44 AM


I agree with Lori and love the changes in your poetry..I see the growth in  learning about who you really are and for you to make the best of it.


M

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13 posted 2008-07-15 12:23 PM


wow DIxie....I have been there...done that...
Love is real or it isn't and when it is you know it....Love is eternal!!!!!!!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

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14 posted 2008-07-16 12:46 PM


And, Dixie dear, the best bandage is "forgiveness".  We do a lot of things until we know what we're really doing and even when we know we still slip back every now and again.  The ladder we must climb is very slippery but you're climbing!  Go, girl!  

Helen

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15 posted 2008-07-23 03:29 PM




"The dandelions are here this morning
but they'll be gone by tonight,"

perfect lines Dixie

I like this poem so much



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16 posted 2008-12-12 07:17 PM


Siiiiiigh

This is .............

Smiles

Jes / Dreamer

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17 posted 2008-12-12 08:18 PM


Yeah your back!!!!!

-Juju

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Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Huan Yi
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18 posted 2008-12-12 08:26 PM


.


"wounds left on me
from hurting you"


Whose
are more painful
and more enduring?


.

LindsayP
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19 posted 2008-12-12 09:49 PM



Dear Dixie I echo the remarks of Blue Seranade, she was spot on with her response.

Great poem.

Lindsay

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20 posted 2008-12-13 10:43 AM


Dixie - your poetry is always so intricate and skilled.  I love the way you write.  Each poem is a new joy.

Merry Christmas, young lady.

YoungatHeart2
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21 posted 2008-12-13 09:09 PM


So I look for bandages in all shapes
to cover the wounds left on me
from hurting you, (not meaning to)
and from loving you eternally.

I love this part. I love your writing, Dixie.
Remember me? It has been a long time.

Patricia
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22 posted 2008-12-14 09:03 AM


Incredible writing.  So deeply felt.

Patricia

2islander2
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23 posted 2008-12-14 09:54 AM


great love write
yann

Patricia
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24 posted 2008-12-15 12:21 PM


Dixie,

I second Honeybunch! It is great to read you again. A good reminder to get back here more often.

Patricia

steavenr
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25 posted 2008-12-15 12:34 PM


"I look for bandages in all shapes
to cover the wounds left on me
from hurting you"

...such powerful words...such emotional eloquence...extremely well done

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