Open Poetry #43 |
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The Obvious Rant |
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CrazyHorse Junior Member
since 2008-08-23
Posts 31New-Brunswick, Canada |
Up is up Down is down Black is black Round is round You are you I am me My brain thinks My eyes see My hands feel My feet walk My heart aches My mouth talks My stomach starves My bed is bare My legs are restless My scalp hairs Night is night Day is day Life is life When death's at bay The ground's below The sky's above These things I know But what is love? Love is vast Love is grand Love's a word I would rather not slam Love's a number Love's devine Love's an answer Love's a waste of time Love's an arrow Love's a break Love's a foot Stuck in my doorway Love's a ceiling Love's a wall Love is sleep With constant wake-up calls Love's being naked Love's a soundless shout Love's an answer A question I can live without |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It is all that... and so much more. *S* I liked your rant... hope it helped! *S* |
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SarBear Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 205Massachusetts |
Awesome write. I enjoy the way you organized the poem. It flowed nicely. |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
This is a very clever piece of work but how right is it? I think we would all give a different answer. Do not go gentle into that good night. |
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