Open Poetry #43 |
They Say |
Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
They Say THEY say, and they are they who know, that time it conquers all, it heals, it soothes, it helps to ease, and possibly forget, I say, and I am only ME, that though they know, cuz they are they, and dare not ask they how, don't put all focus on that time, or be sure you'll miss the now. How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I agree! ~ and like yourself, I often wonder who "THEY" are! Hmmmm! I just had a thought! You and I may be "THEY" to them! lol Yeppers! Be in the now and live your life in the moment! ~ be it great or not so great! Hugs to you and a big smiley face, EA |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is a great message, dear Gumpy! And you wrote it well. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
When I was younger I was always worrying what "they" said or thought; now it is they who worry about me. Nice work. |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
thank you all very much for your words. it's been a while but nice to be here again. How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much? |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Oh! That all familiar word "They" THEY might not like the way I act. THEY might be angry if I say that. THEY might say something nasty behind my back if I do that. "THEN" comes "DID YOU HEAR" what "THEY" did to the old car down the block? Good jobber on this one. Hugs BonBon |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
Thanks for reading bonnie. They have a way with words as do you.. Thank you Gumpy How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much? |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Wise words my friend!!!!! lis |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
thanks to you ladylisa. Gumpy How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much? |
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hiddenIntheDark Junior Member
since 2008-08-27
Posts 20 |
wow I really like this. Good job! |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
thank you very much "hidden" Gumpy How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much? |
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XoDenisseoX Junior Member
since 2008-08-09
Posts 14 |
hey, wow thats a really really good poem. I love he way its written and the play of the word they? i mean who hasnt been in that spot right? well yeah amazing job! hope to see more work from you |
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Lady Ayla Member
since 2008-07-19
Posts 84WV, United States |
Very nice. I got a little mind-tied when reading it, though. |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
XoDenisseoX thank you so much for your words. I didn't think "they" would mind. lol Lady Ayla thank you very much. It brain tied me too. Gumpy If I were three and you were Two, |
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