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The cabin |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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The cabin He has to ask at the cross road. So many years. The last august-visit at this place had been when his father was a part of it. Their big catch is a family myth we cherish. Smoky sun down walks towards the desolate cabin. A creek is flowing down the time. She looks up. There is the promised rainbow, taut like a fishing-rod. And somewhere there at the eternity is a big catch. clever talks delay friendship! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Again, my dear Ku, with your masterful words you painted a scenery that captivates the reader deeply. Love, Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
A lovely, nostalgic piece. Ku. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I love what you said in this poem. Even more, I love what you didn't say, and how you didn't say it.  - Owl |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This is too beautiful for its lines and its between-the-lines not to be bumped up to the top again. - Owl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautifully constructed to bring the images to life and the way it flowed just added more enjoyment to the read. Well done. |
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