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Heaven's Tears |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto 
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When children cry Across the lands Innocence dies By cruel hands Injustice flows Poverty thrives Blood now sowed Reap what dies Endless struggle To live a day So far to go Atrocious way Caught in darkness Pray for light Tortured endless Infernal fight All we do All we kill Humanity’s rule Blinded still My God does see My God does hear My God does cry Fall now Heaven’s Tears For those who are suffering ethnic cleansing genocide and crimes of humanity. Copyright © 2008 vduna Inspired-8 |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
A very impassioned and heartfelt plea. All too often such calls to humanity are ignored because our world appears to be deaf. Do not go gentle into that good night. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Newpoet Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 72 |
I enjoyed the easy flow to a powerful message. Thanks. |
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Lady Ayla Member
since 2008-07-19
Posts 84WV, United States |
It flowed really well, and it's very thoughtful of you to dedicate the peom to the people suffering. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Inspired-8, Free will is a gift from God. It’s a part of the scheme of the whole. Bobby |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Thank you friends for reading. peace vic |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
If we all add our rail voices to the multitude's the message will get home. Nicely written. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you for this compassionate write, we must indeed break the silence whenever we can. May humanity awaken to Love! Intense. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Woodsman Junior Member
since 2008-09-03
Posts 25Stony Creek, Va originally...Now Muskoka Ontario |
Touching.... "In Between" by Brian T Brewster now available on Amazon.com and Barnes & Noble |
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allmo New Member
since 2008-09-06
Posts 6California, USA |
I like this one, thank you for sharing. allmo |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Thanks all for reading and commenting  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
"Heavens Tears" a plea right from the heart! thank you for sharing  Theresia |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A very thought provoking post this one and my deepest sympathy goes out to all those poor folks whose lives are torn apart by ethnic cleansing genocide. May God be with them. Lindsay |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
An incredible write on an issue that is not covered enough in the media, nor paid attention too enough by those in power. Poignant piece. May all who sffer find peace in their countries and for those who are refugees may they return home to a place without harm. |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Charisma Lindsay Amusemi thank you for reading wrote this after reading about Dharfur. peace vic |
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ms robey Junior Member
since 2008-11-18
Posts 25davenport iowa |
beautiful, beautiful, just darn beautiful |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
thank you Ms Robey : ) |
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