Open Poetry #43 |
Our judgment on each other |
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
You judge me by your senses given The voice I use and word I write Then by the look I give in sharing By my thoughts on what is right You’ll learn to trust when test is over But ever still a wall remains High enough to hide some secrets That the mind forever claims Forever we do inner question Seek a smile and friendly hand Want to give where warmth is waiting Just want someone to understand I look at you and make my judgment No different am I from the rest But treat you honest in the process For that seems to work the best I see that sparkle in your eyes The smile within you cannot hide We share a trust that friendship makes And then reveal our human side |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah Rick, you have a golden heart |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
kind and thoughtful words that most all of us need to remember and live...those who live in houses of glass should not throw a rock. |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
This is a very accomplished piece; well written and well thought out. A truly fine read indeed. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Dixie my friend, lovely to see you on my screen this morning, thank you for your reply and heart felt thoughts. Magnus my friend, thank you for the visit and comment, much appreciated. TheAnonDavid, I very much appreciate your reply here my friend, thank you for taking the time to respond. To you all my friends, again thank you. Rick |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"I look at you and make my judgment No different am I from the rest" The difference is that you know it and only once it's known can it be changed - and you change it here through your words. Enjoyed! Helen |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Helen, lovely to get your reply today my friend and the words you give, I am very much an open book, I write as I think of life, to share something from within gives me a good feeling. Great to have you visit here, take care. Rick |
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