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Open Poetry #43
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kanashe
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since 2008-05-21
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america
0 posted 2008-07-13 04:47 AM

your back
my fallen love
you came home
i forgive you my love
here's my soul
you saved my being
my sweetest friend
you saved my life
your back
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XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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1 posted 2008-07-13 06:55 AM

Perfect. I am unable to name the emotion, but I felt it.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·
SarBear
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since 2003-06-05
Posts 205
Massachusetts
2 posted 2008-07-13 12:17 PM

Great write. I can really feel your emotions.
kanashe
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since 2008-05-21
Posts 59
america
3 posted 2008-09-12 12:26 PM

thanks =)
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