Open Poetry #43 |
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The Snow |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
The Snow The snow gives birth to a gurgling stream; her child ventures forth to find it's own path through stones and earth, laughing! She vanishes, leaving her essence flowing gently in clear mountain streams and her children become a mighty river. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I have always appreciated the winter and it's cleansing that it gives the earth. I really enjoyed reading your view in this area. |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
YES ! ::smiles:: (((WindWalker))) I may not always reply...because I often do not know what to say... but... I always read and am always touched in some shape, form or fashion. You are one of the ones I look for. Now... stop feeling (((spayshel))) and get over yourself. ::smiles:: Good luck with that |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
'Nature'ally written by a divine poet! You not only observe Nature, you feel Her and become at one with Her. Your God-given talent is being put to very go(o)d use! ![]() Love & Nature's Light, EA ![]() |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I agree with Linda, I think I like your poetry so much because you have a special bond with nature and express it with such beautiful words. Ida |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
We all love nature (well, most of us anyway) and this is a little gem of observation that encourages us to love it more. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
This 'write' captures the essence of many places in the 'front Ranges' of the Rockies; etc. I especially love the beginning: "The snow gives birth to a gurgling stream; her child ventures forth to find it's own path through stones and earth, laughing!" applause for this 'penning'! |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
I love this but hate to think about winter approaching! ooxx Marti |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The world works in magical ways. Enjoyed this WW ![]() |
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Woodsman Junior Member
since 2008-09-03
Posts 25Stony Creek, Va originally...Now Muskoka Ontario |
One of my own favorite topics...Well put "In Between" by Brian T Brewster now available on Amazon.com and Barnes & Noble |
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