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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-08-29 06:30 AM

we are copper and rain with winds today
the music of our belly is inconsistent
lovely in it's unpredictability

like the moans of old trees sometimes
when there are storms and they pretend
they don't enjoy the tugging at their roots

or the bending and leaning positions
that makes them do things new
over and over until they are learned

much like our love after other lovers
and us taking time to get to know it
as we burn it over our blazing gazes

just to melt the metal off our amber

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daark (from white stone series)

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2008-08-29 07:42 AM

This is amazing. Does that sound trite - oh well and too bad.

A

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2008-08-29 09:13 AM

Ms ali-san. I know you really trite hard not to sound tried. Thanks babe

SEA

Moderator

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2008-08-29 09:16 AM

"like the moans of old trees sometimes
when there are storms and they pretend
they don't enjoy the tugging at their roots"

you make me want it to storm!!

Dark Stranger
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Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2008-08-29 09:22 AM

Ms sueseaglue. Ditto babe, thanks

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2008-08-29 01:22 PM

Enjoyed the view from the inside and the comparison worked greatly.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2008-08-29 02:03 PM

Friend Mark, thank you guy for the read and comment.

Indigo
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since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

7 posted 2008-08-29 04:08 PM

each drop of rain then
dances and waters the tree,
both thirst and play quenched.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2008-08-29 05:09 PM

ms indi...may she never be quenched
and he never cease the panting
thanks lady!!

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

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In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2008-08-29 09:39 PM

this sounds a little like OWG

lovin this from a far....amber is a favorite blend!

hugssssss

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I never let one moment define me,
I define myself by all moments and how they teach and touch me......02

SkaaDee
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since 2008-04-07

Posts 116
Canada

10 posted 2008-08-29 10:51 PM

I can tell you've turned a phrase or two.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2008-08-30 06:04 AM

Lady Lauren....thanks special friend for the eyes always lovely and welcome.

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skaadee, thanks guy for the read and nod

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

12 posted 2008-08-30 11:39 AM

nice read

Dark Stranger
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West Coast

13 posted 2008-08-30 12:32 PM

thanks van

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

14 posted 2008-08-31 04:41 PM

quote:
like the moans of old trees sometimes
when there are storms and they pretend
they don't enjoy the tugging at their roots

You are the storm maker and also the drummerboy who guides the brave lovers through their wild emotional waves.

Such a delight!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

15 posted 2008-08-31 09:04 PM

you blow my amber
with your metal head

and im groovin
to the tango
of trees,entwined
and wined in eachother trenches

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

16 posted 2008-09-01 05:46 AM

ms mar, thanks babe

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ms inky, thank you hon for the touch

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