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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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Who I was and who I am is not who I will be when attuned is the mind into a future view but views are like the mist hanging low and thick and turning every day into the deepest fog. The thought to be as one who clears the air for love springs hopeful in the breast each day I think of you but thoughts are like the sun coming out and going in in accordance with the times. But the dreams of today speak to me, you know, and though I work the same as I’ve always done before the machinery of heart has been updated new. I hear the whirr and hum; could this indeed be love that can see through the fog and affix the thoughts of you stable and undone by the turn of time? In this view I see you new standing ready to begin the journey to love’s final end that cannot ever be ~ and I smile my welcome now for you to know I know the sun stays out long enough to clear the deepest fog! Helen / 5 March 2008 |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Helen, I feel hope for new beginnings - am I close? Beautiful. Alison |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Alison, You are close but it's like I have to think a new beginning before it can be so I'm thinking, thinking, and writing - thought, word, and then will the deed be? Only time can tell. Thanks so much for reading. Hugs Helen |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I myself, am starting a new beginning, therefore, this was the perfect read and hit very close to home, embracing, soothing and in great anticipation...lovely my friend, simply lovely writing. hugs Lee J. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I agree with LeeJ, this was a beautiful piece of writing, Helen even if it is just "thinking" for now.  M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Wonderful conclusion of a deeply and captivatingly thought through write. Always admiring your ability of bringing emotions on to the paper that have wringed through the mind to land upon the heart. Love and hugs, dear Helen. Margherita |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh damn, the tears are appearing at your lovely comments. That's it, that's all, until they disappear. Thanks so much! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Let the season come, With whispers and soothing sounds. Hugs Gal, nice write! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You put a lot of thought into this one Helen A great write. Lindsay |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm so glad your both thinking and writing, Helen. My muse took the route South, I believe, and isn't coming back until there's no further chance of snow! And that may be awhile yet, the way the winter's been going! So, I'm getting my substance from those whose muses haven't rocketed off elsewhere... it's good just to read! |
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PurplePenButterfly Member
since 2008-03-06
Posts 65Canada |
I enjoyed your poem, deep in thought but conveys for me, inspiration and one can conquer anytbhing, just have to be postive and journey onwards. |
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