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whispers in the wind |
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violet-dark New Member
since 2008-03-05
Posts 6chile,santiago in south america |
the wind blowing getting bigger, its urging me to pull the trigger, "go on little girl it won't hurt, just let the blood seep in your shirt" I keep saying its not right but my mind says it will end the fight the rain starts falling and the wind is calling "take your life no one would care take your life, no one was there" i think about these words again and think back to how it began it began cutting my arm because i liked harm now its all the way to suicide and if anyone would care if i really did die a shakey hand picks up the gun one bullet, just one tears start to fall once more thoughts rushing back to me like before I can't do this, i can't die i can't stand to see my friends cry my family and friends clouded in pain i couldn't hurt them for me being insane tears dont fall |
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jessie Junior Member
since 2007-03-27
Posts 44AUSTRALIA. |
WELCOME TO PIPS LOL nicely done indeed you are very talented hope to see loads more of your work |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
For a second there I thought this was beyond the guidelines until you turned it around to show that nothing is gained from destructive thinking. A good message in this to get help when needed. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
  ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I can't do this, i can't die i can't stand to see my friends cry my family and friends clouded in pain i couldn't hurt them for me being insane" ~ I am glad that I continued reading on to your closing stanza with its important message.  EA |
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