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Please, rain
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Please, rain |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Anticipation the clouds tease, in slow motion perhaps tonight, rain ~*~ I beg of the sky stay warm…please no more snowing gift me instead, rain ~*~ I wait patiently pretending I have patience and the clouds still tease… ~*~ A prayer is offered in repetitive chanting please rain…please…please rain ~SEA~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Careful what you wish for, dear... lately, the weather's been responding... in spades! |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
Beautiful photo and lovely poems. enjoyed and wish for the rain too. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I wish for lots and lots of rain!!!  Hey I'm on a hill  LT thank you!  |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
SEA, you have had more than your fair share of rain, I remember when you were a mere puddle....  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LOL nope, i always want more...  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Loved it SEA...always like you writes about rain...(me, I love the rain). j. |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
Loved the poems but you wish for rain? Really? |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
jwesley!! yep rain...good thank you..simon, yes really really I don't think I will ever wish for snow again...lol |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
What i try with a downpour You say in drop upon drop till we sweetly drown in your perfect rain Come on rain!!! Hugs, Robert |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 thank you Rob!! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
SEA, This is a rather nice presentation for your rain poem. Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I agree...give Sea some rain...some precious wet rain...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
High Cee! ~ Ooops! It's my musical background! I meant, "Hi, SEA"!!!  It's a good thing that you live on a hill! After your invigorating rain dance of 'pleaful' words, the rains will undoubtedly be coming! ~ and coming! Beautifully scribed, Susan! Linda  |
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Jezzika Member
since 2005-01-05
Posts 154work |
This poem was awesome!! You are always wishin' for that rain...lets hope for some sun just kiddin' this was great I loved it |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I second what Sunshine said. We got lots of rain last night, as well as some unwanted stuff. A lot of times, we get more than just rain here in Oklahoma. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
lovely-fine imaging (photo. and poetic)! applause!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Welp come on over gal, we have plenty of it, flash flooding and all that good stuff. Enjoyed. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Boy, did we ever have a storm of rain, high winds and wind damage last night....yes, I know how snow and lots of it can get one down...but, do be careful what you wish for love....hugs Lee J. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It seems to rain everywhere, except where you live. This is very beautiful, it shows a deep longing. Love. Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! I love it! wish I could send you some of mine |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely! ARCTIC WIND |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Oh Sea you are not the only one wanting rain We are having a ten year drought here in Victoria and things are very grim, but I enjoyed your writing and I hope it rains for us all. Lindsay |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
SEA I love the rain that bounces off the ground. That hard, pounding rain that makes me want to run out and get totally soaked, play in puddles, splash and jump ... and drive my car through them full tilt. I want rain too now. A |
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KeyLimeSorbet Member
since 2008-03-05
Posts 74Colorado |
oh this has made me miss houston soooo much!!! It rains, no wait, it POURS there!! days and days of rain and running through massive puddles! Now we are stuck running through frost bite :-( |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Your wish for rain is understood by one who does the rain dance~ I wish you rain ... to fill the SEA and just a little left over for me~  *HUGLETS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Very nice. Your words flow as gently as the rain. Enjoyed. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You wouldn't want to live on a hill in California when it rains. The houses tend to slide down the hills. Mostly expensive homes so I don't have to worry but I hope you get you rain and I do love rain too. Ida |
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