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Open Poetry #42

When She's Not Around

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-03-03 05:24 AM

When She's Not Around

I'm not sure if it was
the softness of her skin
or the softness of her heart
that made my feelings start.
Probably it was equally both of them,
and possibly it was the sweetness of her kiss,
for it is the sweetness of her kiss I've found,
yes it is truly the sweetness of her kiss
that I miss when she's not around.

JamesLee
03March
2008

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-03-03 08:09 AM

You are most definitely in love, dear James, and isn't that a wonderful state to be in!!

Lovely longing!

love
Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2008-03-03 08:14 AM

awww

I remember that feeling

nice one James

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2008-03-03 11:48 AM

enjoyed

LadyTom
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 353
LA, CA

4 posted 2008-03-03 01:59 PM

Oh, the romance.

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

5 posted 2008-03-03 02:02 PM

nice......

John

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

6 posted 2008-03-03 04:41 PM

Mmm...kisses make some great memories! Beautiful-I really enjoyed~

I would rather my words fall upon deaf ears than a closed mind...

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

7 posted 2008-03-03 04:45 PM

wonderful James! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2008-03-03 05:26 PM

Very Wonderful JamesMichael

ARCTIC WIND

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

9 posted 2008-03-03 08:58 PM

James,

The memory of sweet kisses will keep you going until she comes back.

This poem works well for me.

Bobby

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

10 posted 2008-03-04 12:43 PM

Awwww James this is so sweet

Hope

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