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Falling Stars While Writing
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Falling Stars While Writing |
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trevorskogsbergh Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 129South Pasadena, CA 
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Falling stars in the afternoon Not seen by the naked eye While writing down my journal entries And trying not to cry The pale light given, from the moon Transforms the darkest sky The scattered words across the pages Smeared ink begins to dry The shadows dance upon my walls The tick tock ticking sound is nigh Each page I turn, is harder still My hand moves steadily by The stars sit bright on shelves above Like raindrops way up high The stillness in this room I feel Makes me want to try Looking at this velvet background My thoughts they do imply Of the time I’ve spent writing words And the love of life I deny Better to die, and sleep |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
much enjoyed! I love any poems about falling stars |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Trevor, you have Mastered the art of composing poetry full of esoteric allusions...This is real good, John |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
very good. enjoyed |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Descriptive write! Lovely Title! ARCTIC WIND |
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