Open Poetry #42 |
BY THE RULES |
Abe Senior Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 694Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end! |
BY THE RULES Searching for the words To express just how I feel; But there is nothing left to say, No more to reveal. I don't know where I'm headed, Where my path may go, Guess I don't give a damn, Don't really want to know. I can see no end To the loneliness Or anyone to fill the void Of the emptiness. Moments stolen from the day, The parting in the night, A goodnight kiss before you leave Doesn't always "feel so right". "To have loved and lost." May be a nice saying, But it's not worth the price That we end up paying. The pain and hurt and heartache, The sadness and the sorrow, Knowing as you leave me I won't see you till tomorrow. Then maybe only for an hour, If I'm lucky, two or three, But anymore, my darling, That's not enough for me. I want you near me always, Forever by my side, To share a life together Filled with love and pride. But I guess I know the answer, You've told me in your way And I can't accept the fact That you'll just leave someday. I plan to win this time; By the rules "all's fair", You can ask me to desist And I will, because I care. But if you might be interested In someone such as me, We will be together, Just you wait and see. Del "Abe" Jones Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity. [This message has been edited by Abe (03-03-2008 05:47 PM).] |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very well said! applause!! |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Go fo it Abe, faint heart never won fair lady as they say...good luck, let us know if you won the maidens hand... |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
Very good. heart song of longing for love. Not by the rules but Follow your heart. Very good. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed your thoughts! ARCTIC WIND |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Abe, The heart that you show is very beautiful. Alison |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
The other side of Abe. Very nice and I hope it does the trick. "late" |
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