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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Difference Do you remember what I told you? I'm only lonely when I'm in love… When I felt the whiskers on you face How they brushed slowly across my skin In your arms I forgot to kiss you Without any word you walked away You would think that I had learned by now I guess in the end I never changed -Juju -"So you found a girl Who thinks really deep thougts What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos [This message has been edited by Juju (03-05-2008 02:44 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Juju, this is absolutely beautiful. There is such a growth in your poetry since you first came here, and how lovely it is to watch your words grow. You fly high with this one gal.  |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
beautiful indeed. A quite voice. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Absolutely love it...James |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Thankyou for your responses (: -Juju |
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