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Wait with me
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Wait with me |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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Dreams are like a God-send if we can only understand but it’s like the mind retains the feel of ages past when lovers loved and lived in well founded certainty. Another face, another name, but I am not dismayed or confused by the dream for the feel is still the same, the reaching up the same, and that knowing overtakes night time trickery. I think again another life will find me finding you and so it is for every one who well and truly loved before the quirks of life made of the together two separate parts. You love me, yes, you love me not, no happy daisy chain this lot that stretches for a million years and brings in the yearn and want time and time again. Option one, no, maybe two, perhaps I’ll think there is a way to live today like yesterday and carry over happiness but, but, but, I sure do know how creative love can be and so I wait; please wait with me until love moves with the times that once fulfilled a life! Helen / 2 March 2008 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah Helen... this is truly beautiful!  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks Roniece. Perhaps it's something that had to be said because my computer has remained stable enough for me to write it. |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
dear friend your poetry definitely has the power of simplicity, it is difficult to write simple poems with such deep feelings. i love :the mind retains the feel of ages past when lovers loved and lived in well founded certainty. clever talks delay friendship! |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
That night time trickery has a lot to answer for Helen, I enjoyed this a lot, Thanks John |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You love me, yes, you love me not, no happy daisy chain this lot that stretches for a million years and brings in the yearn and want time and time again. Dear Helen, so good your pc resists!! This is a wonderful poem and it most certainly speaks to many a heart! I believe this yearning - which seems can't ever be totally satisfied - is the yearning for the absolute perfection of God. He shines through us whenever we love. May we love enough! love and hugs Margherita |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hello Helen...I've missed reading you. Is it you that's been missing, or I? A thought-filled and emotive poem... A contract made in the place beyond form, always causes searching for a way to make it happen, me thinks. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Honey, it was a pleasant surprise to find a new penning of yours, this morning!  "Perhaps I’ll think there is a way to live today like yesterday and carry over happiness" ~ Now that would be an innovative technique that would guarantee you millions of dollars! Keep the faith, Darlin'! The power is in your hands! ~ and in your dreams! Love to you! Linda  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and so I wait; ... until love moves with the times that once fulfilled a life! love the ending, Helen M |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you all so much for your lovely replies. The computer's gone again so, yes, it just had to be said. Seems that it's not too bothered about saying thank you but I am so I've made a plan. I shall sorely miss my old pc but I guess it's time to move on and tackle Vista. Thank you all again and know I shall miss all your wonderful words until I'm back in the "saddle" again. Love Helen |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Heres hoping your new Pc Will help you see New Vistas over the horizon.... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh thank you! I see new vistas all the time because nothing stays the same but this, of course, is based on how I'm thinking at the time. I mean, a tree is a tree, but how differently it appears when the mind and emotions are allowed to be free! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Helen...I just hooked up my new Vista. It's wonderful not to fear constant creashes. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Martie - we have to move with the times or else we get left behind but sometimes I'd like to just stick with what I know. "Change or die" and I think that's worth noting on a spiritual level too for those who are somewhat complacent but I'm no expert on stuff like that. Hugs to you dear lady! |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Helen I love the emotion and beauty of your poetry. xoxoxo Alison |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
I do too Helen and then some Great write. Lindsay |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
A quick thank you Alison and Lindsay before "the crash". I appreciate your comments very much. Helen |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Emotion Filled Write!  ARCTIC WIND |
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