for the women of rosie's place

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Open Poetry #42

for the women of rosie's place

dollmaker
Member

since 2006-08-30

Posts 155
mass dorchester

0 posted 2008-02-28 02:03 PM

HANG ON TO YOUR DREAMS,

AND HOLD ON TIGHT.

WORK HARD AND DON'T LET OBSTACLES GET YOU DOWN,

SMILE EVEN WHEN LIFE MAKES YOU WANT TO QUIT AND

FROWN. KEEP ON REACHING FOR STAR'S AND SOMEDAY ALL

YOUR HOPES AND DREAMS WILL COME TRUE.

REMEMBER ROME WAS NOT BUILT IN A DAY, SO DO NOT

GIVE UP HOPE EVEN WHEN THINGS LOOK BLEAK.

ALL OF STRUGGLE IN THIS LIFE, EVEN MOST PEOPLE

IN HOLLYWOOD HAD A HUMBLE START.

REMEMBER ALL DREAMS ARE ACOMPLISHED WITH ALOT OF

GREASE TO THE WHEEL BEFORE THEY HAPPEN. SO DO NOT

BE AFRAID TO GO FOR THE GOLD.

IN DARKNESS THERE IS ALWAYS LIGHT.

LOVE, KERRI AND THE DOING FOR OTHERS GROUP

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-02-28 02:16 PM

Dollmaker,

I'd advize not capitalizing every letter. The English language has rules for capitalization that must be followed.

Bobby

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

2 posted 2008-02-28 03:46 PM

The poem is not bad.

But I do think that Mr.Jordan is right on the cap thing.

dollmaker
Member

since 2006-08-30

Posts 155
mass dorchester

3 posted 2008-02-28 05:03 PM

DEAR READERS,
SORRY 2 WRITE IN CAPS, BUT IT

MAKES IT BETTER FOR ME TO SEE WHAT I AM

WRITING. I WAS BORN WITH C.P., SO SOMETIMES

I MUST OVERCOMPENSEATE...

SPELLING AND GRAMMAR ARE TOUGH 2.

BUT I AM SORRY IF THE WAY I WRITE IS TOUGH.

DOLLMAKER

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-02-29 03:52 AM

Kerri, you SHINE!

Your soul dances in these words.

Love
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2008-02-29 04:08 AM

Enjoyed...James

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