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perhapsing in shy black sky |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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perhaps in black today with only imagination under you will be a cloudy shy sky dancing over my old ocean I miss you lady rain when you are not my dawn coffee when you are not the whispering that wears my music bring for me your nectar and bathe my upturned mouth til I am gulping with smiles the flavors of your heaven fill my footprints with your lather and take from them the deep empty always wanting more of your liquor to satiate their missed directions give us this day our riverings __________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
smiles.... Mr Daark I think I could wear you well... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r & b...but of course you could ms B..thanks babe |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
perhapsing you are smiling today  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you make me wish it were raining...but? I wish that a lot, don't I?   |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Will we ever convince you, dear D. to bind these jewels into books? They would be a precious collection. love Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I agree with Margherita (and it seems that I am ALWAYS in agreement with her! lol) ~ "Will we ever convince you, dear D. to bind these jewels into books? They would be a precious collection." Dark One, there is much light in your poetry. ~ Albeit, a great deal of it is of a soft, ambient, and sultry variety.  It would also appear to me from your sensuous pennings, that you are 'tantrically' talented, as well! |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
I miss you lady rain when you are not my dawn coffee when you are not the whispering that wears my music stretched out against sky sipping word clouds wet with rain, thirst has a new name. This was so very lovely, DS. Indigo |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
very beautiful. ah, romance!!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thank you lady friend ______________ ms suesea, thank you babe for letting me touch your thoughts here ________________ ms mar, thanks hon for looking in and for the blessing of your suggestion..perhaps someday? ___________________ ms ea, thank you special lady for the eyes and the thought...oh I would need a private editor then wouldn't I..grin _____________________ ms indi, you touch back with gentle power, thank you babe _______________ TomMark, thank you friend for read |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS...If blue sky could read this poem, I think that it would miss the clouds. |
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firestorm Member
since 2008-02-26
Posts 109 |
skies can be as endless as the oceans-ever changing from one moment to the next-nicely put |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I recently met a taxidermist with a foot fetish!!! This brought him to my mind for some reason!!!! Bye 4 now, ME ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, thank you little neighbor..you smile me _________________ ms firestorm, thank you for perhapsing in this one _________________ ms angel...your mind is a treat to view, thank you |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Fun write Dark Stranger ARCTIC WIND |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D Sometimes your poetry is so beautiful that it hurts to read it. Beauty does that sometimes. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
artic friend, thank you ____________ ms ali-san, a nice pain I hope, something that will always smile you, thank you |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yes, D. It is a pain that one gets when they see something that is almost too beautiful. Don't want to sound like I am gushing here - but, do you know what I mean? A |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah just me again... back for another read of your beautiful work... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, yes hon, I do understand..your gush would be a treasured gift. thanks _______________ ms r & b, thanks babe for looking back in...you smile me |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
:: cracks up :: Ooooo-kay  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I read this before and haven't had time to reply until now but find that I am still at a loss for words that do it justice. The beauty of your words touch so deeply sometimes, that it makes me shiver. Absolutely lovely, D. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, grin ____________ ms gs, thanks babe |
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