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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio 
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LIFE Life came riding in on a slippery tongue glistening with tantalizing lips. Promising golden highways- Where there would be no harm or sorrow. That! Was the glittering promise I was told. With eyes blinded by the light- Life stole the words that slipped from my heart Words that would slide down to my willing fingertips and capture the world of fantasy. Now my words are hidden from mankind and from this lowly author with a timid soul. Life, as I gaze from my window, is once again tapping, tapping. Smiling with tantalizing lips. Hugs Bonnie J. January 29,2008 |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
Nicely brought the concept of life into a poetic manner, the first stanza was my favorite |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Bonnie you were missed! It's good to see you are back and with such a significant, beautiful write! Bring life on to this screen again with your talented pen! love Margherita |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Thank you most kindly for reading. Haven't written for awhile, nothing was coming to mind. Then today as I was in the kitchen these words came to mind. So glad you enjoyed. Hugs BonBon  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautiful write. Ida |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I have never seen your work, and i am glad i finally got to see it ARCTIC WIND |
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