Open Poetry #42 |
marina del mosey |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
old oceans are soft gloves the worn by a lover kind that helped carry a dream bucket with half full hurry just when we needed another to dam up the never again when it was overfilled lonely they wrinkle their noses friendly understanding our heart sounds like an old dog's wagging when his head is down playful ready to be no better friend then a god without judgment needing only a petting worship on the mornings they bring tide candy salty sweet like a secret kiss and push the lingering down our shirts to make us itch for more until we have to turn around and face down our wanting to just hoping we can get up again finally coved, and mostly well healed _____________ daark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and push the lingering down our shirts to make us itch for more until we have to turn around and face down our wanting to just hoping we can get up again finally coved, and mostly well healed and face down our wanting to....what an incredible line. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well and then there, that was a healthy sigh... thank you. Lovely. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
when his head is down playful ready to be no better friend then a god without judgment needing only a petting worship Always amazing to see how you play with words. I sense a touch of melancholy in this no doubt excellent write. love Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladies....thank you for walking down this side street of mosey town with me...you bless me |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah beautiful Mr Daark... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I cant believe I had almost missed this one!-- Dark, this is a very Wonderfully written Write! Wonderfully Penned ARCTIC WIND |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Beautiful, another fine "light" one. Just beautiful. Thank you for the sharing. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
achingly beautiful feeling you here |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you pipfriends....you do bless me |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D Sometimes the beauty of what you write moves me to becoming almost speechless. I love this and kind of rode the waves of the images and words. Beautiful. A |
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