Open Poetry #42 |
NEVER TO BE SUNG |
Abe Senior Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 694Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end! |
NEVER TO BE SUNG Dreams of the young at heart Never will compare To the ones I have inside When I see you there. Songs I have, I could write Right here on my tongue But I know they are the ones Never to be sung. Those things that touch the soul And ache so, to be felt Are in that deck of cards Never to be dealt. This life as we should know it Is for me, already done And it's so hard to believe There is another one. Maybe it's imagination Or things I cannot see But why won't this ol' world See all that I, could be? Guess that's "The way life is." "The way the cookie crumbles." Some get up and go right on Some stay down when they stumble. Songs I have, I could write Right here on my tongue But I know they are the ones Never to be sung. Del "Abe" Jones Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Well, this one was well sung!! I love the romantic side of you ... bring your songs to our attention, we shall enjoy them greatly, you have a beautiful heart and voice. Dare to sing! love Margherita |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I'm with Margherita...move them from your tongue to your quill and we will cherish them... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Yes Abe I would like to echo Margherita and Amusemi's thoughts, another great poem. Lindsay |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
this is just beautiful. I esp like the expresion Those things that touch the soul And ache so, to be felt Are in that deck of cards Never to be dealt. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I am loving this, Del. A |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the wonderful Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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