1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
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2008-02-24
08:25 PM
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I Have Loved You
the moon wears your face even when you are not near you are never far the space of you is between rain drops from there I can feel your heart its rhythm is inside my ears constant consistent constant I have loved you in my silence it is an indigo feeling that surrounds a cool warmth in touch past the flaming point of yellow red to the place of burn
"no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice
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2008
Helen Chambers
- All Rights Reserved
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
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posted
2008-02-24
08:44 PM
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I have loved you in my silence
too beautiful Helen... you have a lovely way you express your words... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
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Mysteria
Member Laureate
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada
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2008-02-24
09:03 PM
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it is an indigo feeling
You got that right! I agree you have such a way of wording what could be an ordinary event, or feeling and making it so extraordinary. Lovely Helen, now back to the Oscars
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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
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2008-02-25
02:53 AM
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How absolutely beautiful, dear Helen!!
Every word a gem.
love
Margherita
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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posted
2008-02-25
03:32 AM
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so gorgeous it makes my eyes tear up
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Robert Frazier
Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014
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posted
2008-02-25
01:41 PM
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"I can feel your heart"
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TomMark
Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133
LA,CA
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posted
2008-02-25
02:21 PM
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It is just wonderful that someone can make you write such a beautiful love poem. Always good.
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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
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posted
2008-02-25
04:53 PM
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Really like this...James
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icebox
Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
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2008-02-29
11:58 PM
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Sometimes when I read you, I want to wrap you in a hug and feed you the counterpoint of hot tea and ice cream; this was one of those times.
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effjayel
Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
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2008-03-01
06:11 AM
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Paul Wilson
Member Elite
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711
United States
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2008-03-01
02:57 PM
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Helen...Tender words indeed. Enjoyed...Paul~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul
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