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When She Walks By
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When She Walks By |
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Abe Senior Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 694Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end! 
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When She Walks By I know she doesn't love me But, no matter how I try I can't help the lovin' feeling Every time that she walks by. Her smile is like the sunshine Her eyes light up the sky Her warm touch melts my heart Her sweet voice a gentle sigh. Her laughter is like music From some happy melody And I can't help this lovin' feeling Every time she walks by me. I haven't known her very long Though, I think I know her well And the first time that I saw her Was the first time that I fell. She prob'ly thinks I'm crazy And, I know I am, for sure Cause every time that she walks by I, go crazy, over her. There's something special bout her That feels good when she's around She can lift my spirits, way up high When, I am feeling kinda down. I know she doesn't love me But, no matter how I try I can't help the lovin' feeling Every time that she walks by. Del "Abe" Jones Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Abe, this is absolutely beautiful and sweet. Lovely writing |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Now this is very very lovely. You wear your romantic side very well, Sir! May she fall for you too! love Margherita  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the post!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WellAbe~ What an enjoyable softie side of you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
beautiful and romantic...beautifully soft...!!! if this were a true story than I would say go wow her.... |
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Abe Senior Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 694Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end! |
Yeah, I'm not always a hard ass! Del "Abe" Jones |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Abe, I have enjoyed your poetry a lot, but this is different and very beautiful. I like it. Alison |
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