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rain velvet men-acation
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rain velvet men-acation |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the hollow ground of summer resting her bosom bare on dawn wearing the rain velvet mushrooms like a saturday evening willow mother earth is not angry now just bi-polar on occasion treatable they say in time if she does without men-acation and the toys of their considerations inconsiderate as they may be, maybe thoughtless as the strum of wind across a gypsy's valley mouth as an old man blowing sad songs when the wine is gone to his belly and only the evening still remains to wear his breathing sound arpeggio and does she still dream her winter dreams ____________ daark scribblenote: rain, clouds,a habana and too much time. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Good Morning again Dark, Enjoyed your yet again a very descriptive poem! Thank you for the read ARCTIC WIND |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I think that she will always dream her dreams for you Daark. You write her, lovely. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I wish I had too much time~~ enjoyed you, as always M |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is one of those writes I could curl up in...so loved the feel of this  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
very beautiful Mr Daark.... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
mother earth is not angry now just bi-polar on occasion treatable they say in time if she does without men-acation Yes, a lesson to learn. You offer gems to ponder, dear D. love Margherita |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I like your rain poetry when you have too much time. This is beautiful. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
a & w, thank you for the read ________________ ms gs, thank you ______________ ms MMs thanks babe _________________ ms suesea, thank hon for looking in ______________ ms mar, thank you ___________________ ms r & b, thanks so much ___________________ ms ali-san, thank you babe for touching here |
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