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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I have no photo to share of you, to wake to when morning arrives. Just memories of the last of touch, to warm me during long drives. Its been a gift, the friendship of you, a healing of sorts to embrace and bring back the me that awaits a new Spring, committed tomorrow to face. My words are not heard, those I say to myself often to keep spirits raised when loneliness enters the gentle of mind as I seek to "keep-on-keeping" unfazed. Lasting thoughts, as I sit here alone wondering if voice I'll soon hear, a melody to warm the cold so dreams will again, reappear. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"My words are not heard, those I say to myself often to keep spirits raised" ~ Your words may not be heard, but you certainly know how to write them down!!! Loving hug, Linda  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I have no photo to share of you, to wake to when morning arrives. Just memories of the last of touch, to warm me during long drives........." wow! your in some serious need of some cheering up! lol Powerful and touching write! ARCTIC WIND  |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
a melody to warm the cold so dreams will again, reappear. Beautiful!!!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Lasting thoughts, as I sit here alone wondering if voice I'll soon hear, a melody to warm the cold so dreams will again, reappear. Beautifully expressed longing, dear Maureen. May the dreams manifest! love and hugs Margherita  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
It seems a bit hard to believe that a lovely lady such as you sits alone, but luck is just around the corner. Take care. Lindsay |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Maureen...believe in your dreams.. this is lovely... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Your smile alone, can warm anything sooner than you know it will be spring and the warmth of spring will shine on your face then the cold will surely be erased. Awww sweetie, big hugs to you. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
An especially pleasant, emotional 'write!' I am especially fond of: "Its been a gift, the friendship of you, a healing of sorts to embrace and bring back the me that awaits a new Spring, committed tomorrow to face." applause!! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautifully written, Maureen. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
I enjoyed this read and thought dear friend, I can so relate, to talk up the world in your mind, to raise the spirit but not the joy. Will ponder on this a while, have a wonderful day with happiness, I wish it for you. Rick |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"memories...to warm me" you always write from the heart...such a longing write, and beautiful! Hugs, Robert |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
M- We get lost in yesterday, live for today, and hope for tomorrow. All three keep us going at different times. Enjoyed this! Indigo |
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