Open Poetry #42 |
Orbit |
soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Orbit She only shines her eyes at night walking home, she blazes my path with light the magnetic pull between us you can feel the tug all the way to Venus And when she appears in my sky I can't help but wonder why she's up there anyway spilling her color into the endless grey pulling the tides within me at all the wonder in her She orbits 'round my heart all day I await darkness for her sweet smile to say that I mean something to her and promise that she'll keep in my sky forever When she comes shining into night I know I will live again in that lovely light her pure white glowing Yang to my loser Yin heart goin' out without a bang Unseen the space between an invisible tether connected to her and I get pulled into a swirl maybe I'm the one in orbit, revolving around this girl Gotta find the center of my universe before this violent thump in my heart gets any worse She only shines her eyes at night I'm waking up here alone to a mournful sight the heavenly body of her orbits far beyond, leaving a lonely winter It's her that I've been looking for hoping for a peaceful end to this inner war I'm a victim of a burning heart only her healing hands can return me to the start Sing a song of spring to bring the sun to my sky back in my eyes and pull me into this swirl dreamily I'm stuck orbit revolving around this girl I find she's the center of my galaxy spiraling into the insanely brilliant light she brings to me "Some rides don't have much of a finish; |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed your thoughts ARCTIC WIND |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
a wonderful piece!!!!what a heart song!!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful heart song yes! love Margherita |
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