Open Poetry #42 |
The King And I... |
simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
I was too young to remember The King being overblown and overthrown Being toppled from his throne The day the music really died. It wasn't really my place To have cried To shout and scream and mourn Those memories didn't really belong to me I wasn't even born. To me, The concept of a World before the King arrived Would have been quite strange. I was thrust into a World That he'd already changed. I never saw him at his peak I was only ever aware Of some archaic old antique And back then, I didn't care, But that all seems such a long time ago Before he was my friend instead of being my foe Now, I agree with everyone who's ever said The King's not really dead Because I feel it too And when I hear his voice on my stereo that's when I KNOW That that's really True. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Simon, I remember King George VI very well. He was a wonderfully courageous leader, and a very fine human being. Good work on this poem. Bobby |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Bobby I could be way off ( I usually am) but I interpret this as Elvis? Simon, can you clarify please... John |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
this poem is pretty good. But isn't there a movie and (i think a) book called the King and I? And when i started reading this i thought of the movie and i was like. "This makes no sence." But then i read the comment before me and then i understood why. Great work! ~Zach~ |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
Very much Elvis. But I like it being open to interpretation... |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Thanks Simon and yes, interpretation is good, I love to make me people stop & think and even question what I'm saying or where it is leading....Good job John Zach The King & I was a movie with Yul Brynner.. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Simon, Elvis? Oh my, I'm afraid I never cared much for his music. I know a lot of people do. Bobby |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
Bobby, that's cool, it's not compulsory... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am a fan of this King you evoke here so lovingly. My mother loved him, I love him, my son loves him ... his voice is very unique and his smile? Unforgettable! And rock'n roll? Wow! Enjoyed this much. love Margherita |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
beautiful poem!! |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
ooohhhhh ic ic. i didnt know that lol ~Zach~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I was thinking Elvis right from the start great write Simon... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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