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Open Poetry #42

Wish Whispered.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

0 posted 2008-02-19 03:18 AM

The days ahead will
be bleak, with sun
shining rarely, or go now
unheeded, tormented mind, fitful
dreams i am expecting.
Waking early, gut twisting,
lactic acid in arms.
Dark shrouded eyes in
mirrors, porridge grey skin.
A prayer i send
to you, a wish
privately whispered upon the
night wind blowing cool.
Within the cavernous heart
you posses, keep a
corner, a nook for
me? No matter how
long, my love for
you shall never end.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-02-19 07:59 AM

quote:
A prayer i send
to you, a wish
privately whispered upon the
night wind blowing cool.

Unconditional love is the solution to a serene heart.

This is lovely, Phil.

love
Margherita

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2008-02-19 08:18 AM

To hold love-thoughts forever....
there is nothing wrong with that.
I'm sending warm amber thoughts your way.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2008-02-19 08:23 AM

Those of us who have 'been there'
most assuredly understand!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2008-02-19 08:40 AM

I found the following line exceptionally impacting for me ~

"Waking early, gut twisting"

~ Been there ~ Done that! Starting the day feeling sick to my very core. When I would wake with that feeling in the pit of my stomach, it would come to me that all was not well in my world. Then I was flooded with why that was so. Fortunately, with time, I was completely healed and I am no longer waking up early with that "gut twisting" feeling! May this be true for you in the very near future!

Very expressive writing.

Linda

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2008-02-23 04:30 AM

Phil... heartwords here my friend... know you can email anytime.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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