Open Poetry #42 |
Dreams of you |
Sir_Vampire Member
since 2007-06-12
Posts 96Johannesburg |
With the suns first morning light, My heart is a flutter, ever so slight. On the breeze a scent is carried, amidst the dew. This scent I know, so crisp so warm, the scent of you. I close my eyes to take it remember this feeling. The embrace of the breeze, to whisper your name is so appealing. I part my lips to utter the words close to my heart. For that is where you lie even though we drift apart. I whisper your name, barely those few letters did I find. And slowly open my eyes, yet the tears in them hold me blind. I close my eyes once more and whisper your name yet again. And my heart beats still, waiting for a reply… waiting in vain. The wind dies away and my mind goes astray, Yet another sunset alone, yet I again am alone this day. My mind doubts that which has just taken a hold of me. But my hearts knows with each beat it whispers your name. I live in hope that this will not be just a thought, a dream. I live hoping this won’t be an illusion any longer than it seems… |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
stunning love story...beatiful write |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SirV~ Such a lovely *sigh* of thought~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautifully Written! ARCTIC WIND |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beautiful write, filled with longing. Nicely done, Sir V. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
wonderful!! so sweet a romance. Ah, sigh!!! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
lingering revelation. Nice |
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