Open Poetry #42 |
ginger den treehouse lounge and law library |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you never did finish the willow where the black lady showed you her jewels and danced with ordinary statues you said she was like an entree with exotic flavors of many endings and even more beginnings but you didn't mind such things since I brought you love stories and another room with a window where you could watch contributions as they dangled their offerings and never met the laughter of your eyes when they were the syrup of our discussions _______________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
and never met the laughter of your eyes when they were the syrup of our discussions "The laughter of your eyes" ... now that is something I would like to see!! Whether I find some meaning or not in your words, they still are music by their mere creative sound! love Margherita |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I do so love a once upon a time morning with my coffee, D. Yep, she is a beauty. A |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
you said she was like an entree with exotic flavors of many endings and even more beginnings _ i like the most engrossing lines.this is seer quality and so is the ending |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
but you didn't mind such things since I brought you love stories and another room with a window ~*~ I imagine she didn't. Who could? |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
a troika works best when one doesn't mind getting pushed from the carriage. But then who doesn't like to watch...? Indigo |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I wouldn't mind such things either Mr Daark... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend for your read ______________ ms ali-san, thank you babe for watching her move her statues around __________________ friend poddarku, thank you for the read ________________ ms sun, thanks babe for touching my pen here _______________ ms indi, would expect you to watch and offer options for the dialogue, thanks hon _______________ ms r & b, thank you for looking up from down under ms |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
griz. Yep, what the sunnylady said! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Always A pleasure to Read Dark Stranger! ARCTIC WIND |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
very lovely!! |
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